Fiction

I have to revise some of my short stories for my classes and I was wondering if any of you would be willing to read them. I need to change some things but I don't necessarily know what parts I want to dump and how to tinker with others. The more help the better. I am also offering some form of reward for those who help, probably alcohol. 

And don't think of this as helping, it's more entertainment for you (alright, that's probably a lie). But the writing is better than what I am putting up here. 

So let me know and I'll email it over to you.